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{ CONSTRUCTIVE CRTICISM ON ,DO NOT COPY,STEAL, OR ALTER}

Time:bulletpink: Like 20 hours*okay, a day*
Media:bulletorange:Sketchbook Paper,Prisma/Roseartcolorpencils,Sharpie,,Arcylic Paint

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Original Pose(C) :iconmroczniak: Reference { [link] }
{Please check her out, Mro-chan has awsome traditional skills}

Once Upon a Time
A girl tried to take over
Space-Heaven.
But before she does,
She must become an Angel
to
Heaven


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~The people on this drawing*originaly, the guy was supposed to be Delfino*aka Daisuke* but I didnt want to draw him (X3}, so I asked John*My un-paid model* if he wanted to be in the pic, and he said sure.,The drawings is Arletta-chan's r i s e to h e a v e n as she needs to be kissed by an angel*which is John*, but in RL, he's no close to an angel in reality. I tried a new coloring style on it*without blending, and the drawing pops out without being shiny. I took this a camera because I still cant get acces to a scanner.

Skin Colors
John's
Roseart Peach
PrismaColor Peach (939)
PrismaColor Color Mixture (1077)
PrismaColor Scholar 438 (Hot Pink)
PrismaColor Scholar 330 {Dark Pink-Redish)

Arletta'
Crayloa Peach
PrismaColor Scholar 339
Crayola Tan
PrismaColor Color Mixture (1077)
PrismaColor Scholar 438 (Hot Pink)
PrismaColor Scholar 330 {Dark Pink-Redish)


Mistakes(XD)== Um, yeah, the pose still didnt make any sense after sketching for about 30 to 40 minutes*and I was using a reference, I was making changes the pose so that way, it doesnt look like Mro-chan's drawing* And Honestly, Arletta-chans skin lacks value. Honestly, I did a good job for the first time in my life,so..CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM WELCOME*less than a paragraph though*not in the mood for reading an essay, AND YOU MUST TELL ME THAT YOU LIKE IT OR I WILL SAY THE CRITIQUE IS UNFAIR AND TURN IT DOWN!

The reason why I need you guys to critique is because of my new coloring style. I need you to tell me what I have to fix....*and if its about the shiny art I wont fix it, why, my shiny art makes me happy and if it hurts your eyes, that aint my problem.OKay.*


Laso, I can really need help on my anatomy, so yeah.And tI took this with a camera so it looks very crappy*will scan this soon and this looks so freakin awesome in reality*

Hope you like it

Arletta-chan:heart:

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